If I say ten things,
nine will not be heard and one
will make someone sad.
…
I walked on the shore
conversing with bygone souls,
names long forgotten.
If I say ten things,
nine will not be heard and one
will make someone sad.
…
I walked on the shore
conversing with bygone souls,
names long forgotten.
One response to the first haiku
• Mikaela, March 19, 2012 at 2:58 pm
I heard that.
One response to the second haiku
• Mikaela, March 19, 2012 at 1:26 pm
I got to see the pre-release of this haiku, and I like it even more on second reading. It sounds straightforward, but is the remembering of a memory of memories.
Nice.